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2017/12/20 03:23:25 (permalink)

Inside My Soul

Daryl's Anxiety inspired me to make a thread with my new song from the future EP (5 songs).
 
Here is a demo of the song on YouTube with the lyrics
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vsWbQShkPng
 
There are the rest three songs also on the main page
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCKLz4zGdu2TxBWFZ3WkUATA?view_as=subscriber
 
Would be happy to get some feedback. I was shocked with the news about Cakewalk to be closed. Hope, that the forum will remain somehow, I really like it...
 
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    jamesg1213
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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/20 13:02:54 (permalink) ☼ Best Answerby vdvorn 2017/12/20 17:30:53
    Very cool. Good riffs, good groove,  well judged spoken word verses and then lifting right up at the chorus. I like it.

     
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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/20 17:35:49 (permalink)
    Hi, James
    thank you a lot for your encouragement, your opinion is of a big value for my, especially when I heard your SoundCloud tracks. I have heard all of them and enjoyed, especially your manner of guitar playing. Some interesting mixture of Tom Bolin's, David Gilmour's and Satriani's styles...
     
    I will also send you a personal message with some question you may be able to answer.
     
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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/21 10:30:19 (permalink)
    Great stuff Vlad - love this groove. Playing/mix etc are just right.
    Maybe a bit long? My only criticism

      
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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/21 15:28:05 (permalink)
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    Great stuff Vlad - love this groove. Playing/mix etc are just right.
    Maybe a bit long? My only criticism


    Thanks a lot, Daryl. I can easily shorten the song, if necessary.
    Let us hope that CW forum will survive and we will be able to exchange the songs here...

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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/21 17:48:15 (permalink)
    Nice track I enjoyed that production sounds nicely done.

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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/21 19:02:08 (permalink)
    Boy, I like it. Nothing to criticize here. Good job.
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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/21 19:04:38 (permalink)
    I take it back. The guitar solo needs to come up quite bit. And that is my constructive criticism for the day. Adios amigos. Time for a jog through the park and a hot toddy. 
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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/21 20:36:42 (permalink)
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    Nice track I enjoyed that production sounds nicely done.


    Danke schön, Wookie. :) I have heard your tracks on Soundcloud. Very good relaxing music...

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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/21 20:43:20 (permalink)
    Wayfarer
    Boy, I like it. Nothing to criticize here. Good job.


    Thanks, Wayfarer. I will come up the guitar solo for any future mix.
    I would like to here your tracks, but you don't have a link...

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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/24 14:11:08 (permalink)
    this had me smiling out the gate...lots of attitude and emotion...I have more then a few tune in that lower vocal range and mixing them in so they can be understood can be challenging.  You did a great job on that...in fact the whole mix is very very good and well as the playing.
     
    I really...REALLY like this tune. A++

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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/24 14:15:08 (permalink)
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    this had me smiling out the gate...lots of attitude and emotion...I have more then a few tune in that lower vocal range and mixing them in so they can be understood can be challenging.  You did a great job on that...in fact the whole mix is very very good and well as the playing.
     
    I really...REALLY like this tune. A++


    The you very much, thepogue. Your opinion is a good Christmas present for me... :)

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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/27 15:40:03 (permalink)
    This is really cool!
    Wouldn't change a thing.  I love the combination of the spoken vocals with the guitar lines.

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    Re: Inside My Soul 2017/12/27 17:23:37 (permalink)
    good sound(mix) really good tune!!!

     
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    Re: Inside My Soul 2018/01/05 22:21:24 (permalink)
    Funky groove yet still rockin'.  Loved the clav and acoustic parts filling in those holes in the main riff with strings/pad pulling it all together.   Good stuff. 
     
    And a nice big, open mix to boot.  Sounds really good.     I do agree with Wayfarer though - the solo should come up a little and ride on top. 
     

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    Re: Inside My Soul 2018/01/06 03:37:30 (permalink)
    Loved it.  It has a great feel to it;  at first sort of like a blondie backbeat.  You could make your voice when it's in the lower range at little more expressive (maybe vibrato, or different intervals) instead of the monotone presentation.  OTOH it feels great when you enter the chorus.

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    Re: Inside My Soul 2018/01/07 11:54:39 (permalink)
    Hi, stevec and eph221,
     
    thank you very much for the expert reviews and encouraging evaluations. It's very important for me now...
     
    Sincerely,
    Vlad
     

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