Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song

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2009/09/04 08:31:05 (permalink)

Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song

This is a pretty straight forward punk song.  It clocks in at under two and a half minutes.  No frills, no solos, but some hard hitting drums and loud guitars!! :)  Hopefully some catchy lyrics too.

Comments always welcome and appreciated!!

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    jamesyoyo
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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/04 15:48:15 (permalink)
    Punk vocals with delay? Heaven forbid!

    All kidding aside, lots of energy and good playing. Vocals need some presence. Guitars could bite a touch more.
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    Mamabear
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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/04 21:56:34 (permalink)
    :-)  So much energy!  This is great!!
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    Sabbathack
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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/04 22:36:48 (permalink)
    Jamesyoyo:
    I don't recall using delay on the vocals, lots of verb though...  What would you suggest I change about the vocals?  Thank you!!

    Mamabear:
    Thanks a bunch!!


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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/05 00:13:46 (permalink)
    Lots of bounce to it. Good feel and I liked it. 

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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/05 00:49:14 (permalink)
    Very enjoyable. As always.

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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/05 07:52:12 (permalink)
    Love the Dee Dee Ramone count in. I like the song, energy and mix. My only crit is that it sounds like you use the same drum fill throughout the song (8x by my count). Still like it a lot, tho.

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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/05 15:43:01 (permalink)
    this song is very high energy. very catchy vocal melody and lyrics.  good job
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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/05 17:36:35 (permalink)
     
    Must ............... pogo .................. must .................. gob on band .............. hey ho, let's go!!
     
     
    I'll tell you something bud - for a young 'un, you sure know yer punk onions
     
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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/05 20:20:54 (permalink)
    Hey ho --- it's 1977 all over again!  No non-sense, lots of energy, under 3 minutes, and the traditional punk ending.  What could be better?  I really liked the Ramones (and 1977 ear punk) and I really liked this .
     
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    CLEAN
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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/05 21:32:27 (permalink)
    Lots of fun to listen to.


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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/06 06:01:04 (permalink)
    Tom Riggs:
    Thanks much!

    Foxwolfen:
    Thank you too!

    Geeare1:
    I was intentionally trying to sound as close to the Ramones as possible and put Dee Dee's count in as a joke.  It seemed to fit very so I just left it.  As for the drum fill...  I have a limited selection and can't program them myself.  At close to 200bpm, its hard to find fills that sound real.  :) 
    Thanks for the comments!!

    Malakidreams:
    I've always had trouble writing catchy lines, maybe this is a turning point.  Its funny, because I wrote the lyrics almost as I was recording.  I had an hour to goof off and wanted to get a rough draft recorded.  Hit the play/Record... made up verse 1, Hit the play/Record... made up verse 2, etc...  Once I was done, I went back and recorded them from start to finish. Done.
    Thanks again!!

    Mr SteveStrummer:
    What can I say, I knew you would enjoy and give me glowing review. :) :)  "Young'un"??  I'm not too far behind you. 
    Thanks buddy, can't wait to do more stuff with you!!

    Freddy J:
    My intentions were to try and copy the Ramones ingredients as close as possible without actually playing one of their songs.  Your description fits them, so I guess I accomplished what I set out to! 
    Thank you so much!

    Clean:
    Is it me or is it just fun to listen to your own stuff, because you're right!  I've listened to it a dozen times in the last couple days!!
    Thanks a bunch!!



     

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    Re:Its Over - A Ramones-esque Punk song 2009/09/06 08:22:51 (permalink)
    Wow! I was half asleep, but I'm awake now! Very cool and lively tuneage!

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