It's Time To Go Home - (Remix)

   First, I haven't been able to do much of anything except listen to my garbage tunes, and this one kinda stood out so I remixed it.

I know it's a long tune, but I'm not asking you to listen to the whole thing, I'm just letting you hear the entire song as an option.

This tune was meant to be like hearing the river or creek flowing beside you, or something comforting to make you think about how great life is.  FLOW is what I'm trying to say, I guess I failed, but then again, I guess that depends on where you live and come from.

This ain't a great song, it's just real, sorry I couldn't do better. I remixed this tune and it was meant to sound like the flow of water in sound, I guess I failed. I did what I could.  I really need to re-do this tune, I hope I get the chance, I do have words, only time will tell. This is a remix, and honestly I think it sounds better than the original.

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Bobby

And try is all one can do.

I like it.  

The sounds at the start are nice, sparse, and clear.  It certainly does have a nice, flow feel to it.  The kit maybe a little too up front, but to be honest, after while, it suits.  I don't like the kit fills ... they're far too MIDI.  

And from around 1:40 ish there's something weird happening with the hihats, as if the quantize is weirding out on you.  Not sure if that's an intentional thing or not, but it takes away from the 'flow' feeling, which I'm (otherwise) really getting.

Around 4:00 it may be time for some more development - it starts with some lower guitar, but needs something more.  Perhaps you could start to fill in the gaps with some hammond sounds or EP?  Some extra perc, like shakers, tambos, etc?  That's just personal taste, though.

A nice sound overall, though.  I listened all the way through. Ending was nice.

I think I heard this one before.  I like the arrangement and theme.  Some timing on the guitars in few places.  It is kind of long if all you do is improvising.  You need a main melody and develop a song structure.

  I might have some help on this one, thanks for taking the time to listen. It's going to be interesting to see where this one goes.

Next time you see this title up there it will be new.

Thanks again to all who replied,

Bobby