Jesses Q. Screed...collab with my teacher...Sir Robage

been ill lately
I’m feeling a little better today.
 
This is a collab with my first teacher, Robage.  It is his song.  He wrote it.  He played the acoustic guitars, and sang the vocals.   He gave me permission to quirk it up.
 
I added a new drum track, the backing vocals, piz strings, strings, tweaked the bass, and added a little acoustic lick at the end.  He even let me mix it, not my best effort, but I gotta express.
 
I like this song by Robage, he deservers all the credit.
 
Robage, I love you man, let’s collab again.
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=13299553&q=hi
 
miss you

That's a nice song. I like the strings you added, really quite moving, and they came in just at the right point.
 
Mix is pretty good, perhaps the vocal could come up a little a have a little more ambience.

Yes nice job!  Like Rick says, "a Beatles flavor," which is always great.  I'll even say, "White Album-ish!"

You guys are too nice.
 
I can't take any credit for the song itself, or the vocal, or the acoustic guitar bed, that is Sir Robage.  Only the strings and drums, and mix, and what not. I will Sir Robage know that he has written a great song..
 
I am pleased that the mix is generally well received.
 
I try to collab with him more, but he is busy teaching.
 
The comments are appreciated.  Thank you, and bless you.
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
 

Good song. The mix was good in my ears. Well done!

Hey Kenny,
 
Excellent use of emoticons.
 
Glad you kind of liked it. 
 
Not sure when the ending will get fixed, collaborations over the internet, by nature, are difficult.
 
I can't tell you a lot about Sir Robage, except that he lived at the dog with me.  It was an amazing place and I don't think you would understand.
 
Why don't you sing?
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
 

Yeah, sounds pretty good here - I do like the parts you've added, they give it an entirely different flavor than a typical acoustic guitar + vocal song.     Oh, and I liked the guitar lines you added towards the end.    You may just want to drop the bass track's volume at the very end before it does that little "blrp" thing.