Keep The Motor Running - Remix

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2012/01/31 13:43:17 (permalink)

Keep The Motor Running - Remix

I posted this song several months ago, listened to you comments, and sat on it for a while.  After hearing it with fresh ears, I took some of your suggestions and remixed it.  I pulled the guitars closer to the center, changed the EQ on the vocals, and some other minor tweaks here and there.  I also changed the lyrics slightly.  I don't know if I'm done or not, but I am ready for your comments.  Thanks in advance for taking the time.  It can be found here: http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=10399684&q=hi&newref=1

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    morenoise
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    Re:Keep The Motor Running - Remix 2012/01/31 13:51:09 (permalink)
    Hi Lynn, this grooves along nicely. Hi-hat is a bit distracting but that might be my crappy speakers ; )

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    Re:Keep The Motor Running - Remix 2012/02/02 02:09:00 (permalink)
    Lynn,
    I really liked this. It's a good Southern Rocker.
    Is that a Strat I hear in my right ear?
    Now the crits, which are very small and maybe only matter to me, but when I hear a good rocker the vocal need to be relaxed.
    What I mean by relaxed is I think it's ok to not use proper english. Like "keep your motor running",
    I think it would come off much better to use "keep your motor runin' ". And the same when the lyric is " I'll be coming for you" You didn't say I will be coming for you, I just think a more relaxed "I'll be comin' for you" would sound so much better for you. Like I said , small crit and maybe only matters to me. In the end it is your song to sing. Rock should be in my mind relaxed. Still liked the song .

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