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Warrenlee
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2012/11/13 20:03:53 (permalink)

Keyhole

Hi folks, Another demo I'm working on, a song as narrative, steady groove throughout. Hope you dig. Listen for the police siren at the end, happy accident http://soundcloud.com/warrenlee-1/keyhole Best, Lee
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    Lynn
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    Re:Keyhole 2012/11/14 10:36:13 (permalink)
    This one's hard to judge, except for the siren.  That was a brilliant accident.  The rest of the song could use a tweak;  the rhythm guitar more or less drowned out the vocal which made the lyrics hard to understand.  The song had a Stones vibe to me, but I've come to enjoy your words, so I felt that I missed the message.  Still, this has so much potential and an easy fix.  I'd like to hear it again.

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    Warrenlee
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    Re:Keyhole 2012/11/14 12:29:49 (permalink)
    Hi Lynn, absolutely right.  I will be doubling up the vocal track on this, in addition to adding live drums, and possibly a bit of keyboard.  I do expect it to be good.  :)    As always, thanks so much for listening and taking the time to comment....so very much appreciated!   Lee
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    Re:Keyhole 2012/11/14 12:37:58 (permalink)
    Very cool Lee. This has shades of Lou Reed which is great in my book

      
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    Warrenlee
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    Re:Keyhole 2012/11/14 13:43:23 (permalink)
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    Very cool Lee. This has shades of Lou Reed which is great in my book

    Right on, thanks brother!
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    Re:Keyhole 2012/11/14 14:24:58 (permalink)
     Very cool vib to this tune. A really nice down to earth rock tune played well. I agree maybe a few tweaks to the mix and you're ready to go.

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    Re:Keyhole 2012/11/17 12:00:10 (permalink)
      Gracias! When it's all finished up I'll post, I hope and expect it to be good :) Lee
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