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bapu
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Re: LOOKING FOR THOUGHTS & COLABERATION ON MY SONGS
2013/11/17 12:39:31
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Very atmospheric stuff. Not sure what you would need in the way of collaborations. Nice stuff though.
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theguitarplayer
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Re: LOOKING FOR THOUGHTS & COLABERATION ON MY SONGS
2013/11/17 20:49:15
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Kinda Floidish or Moody Blues in atmosphere. Don't know what your looking for in your creative endeavors but you have a nice start to these pieces. Keep working on them.
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Walt Collins
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Re: LOOKING FOR THOUGHTS & COLABERATION ON MY SONGS
2013/11/18 10:29:55
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KP Duty - not loud enough, the mix needs a lot of work. Can't really hear the song very well, but your voice reminds me a bit of Roy Orbison. Listen to the final mix, and compare it to another (commercial) piece of music that you like, then adjust individual parts until you get in the right ballpark.
Thinking Pink - I think you're using a bit too much reverb. Definitely sounds like Pink Floyd though.
Dragons Breath - Major digital clipping (pops) happening here (big problem). You need to identify the source and fix it. Each track in your mix needs to be recorded at a volume that is as loud as possible, but without distorting. If you're looking to do a little research about this, google for "gain staging" and you should find some really good advice.
I don't mean to sound discouraging, even though the above probably is exactly that. I just figure people who post here are looking to learn and don't want a pat on the head. ;) Your songwriting does show potential, and your willingness to experiment with so many different kinds of instruments (including synths, drums, guitars) will take you far. The only way to learn is through study and practice, so keep it up! :)
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The Band19 
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Re: LOOKING FOR THOUGHTS & COLABERATION ON MY SONGS
2013/11/18 21:49:27
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"I just figure people who post here are looking to learn and don't want a pat on the head. ;)" Most people seem to want just that? Or some other body part? The majority >50% IMHO are looking more for hits than crits... Again, JMHO. All those who cry Ford Ford! Are not of the Ford? Some drive Chevy's...
post edited by The Band19 - 2013/11/18 22:09:27
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bapu
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Re: LOOKING FOR THOUGHTS & COLABERATION ON MY SONGS
2013/11/18 21:59:05
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I just figure people who post here are looking to learn and don't want a pat on the head. ;)
I do it for chicks. Ain't no chicks here. Definition of insanity=Doing the same thing over and over and expecting different results.
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Walt Collins
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Re: LOOKING FOR THOUGHTS & COLABERATION ON MY SONGS
2013/11/18 22:45:22
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The Band19
"I just figure people who post here are looking to learn and don't want a pat on the head. ;)" Most people seem to want just that? Or some other body part? The majority >50% IMHO are looking more for hits than crits... Again, JMHO.
All those who cry Ford Ford! Are not of the Ford? Some drive Chevy's...
I will only compliment your songs if you want Robbie! :)
post edited by Waltenstein Studios - 2013/11/19 10:08:59
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