Latest effort

Hi peeps, well another new song if you care to take a listen

http://soundcloud.com/spa...e-you-seen-her/s-j4W3V

Peace out

Bibs

This is a terrific pop song with a very catchy hook.  It'll probably run through my head all day.  The arrangement and mix are just right.  I look forward to your next effort.

Marvellous! I loved the last one you posted too.

Great job.

Cheers,
Terry.

Sounds good here.  Thanks for sharing.

Great production.  Very commercial studio sound.   You get a great mix.  Good tune, good vocals.  I like it.

Daryl

Your songwriting, playing and singing are all top drawer.  If you did all that on your own, you're a genius in today's music field 

That said, the production sounds a bit thin.  I know that the standard operating procedure it to apply low filtering to just about every track.  Perhaps you took it that a bit too far.  Maybe bring back the bottom of the piano track.

I took a quick stab at EQing a part of your song.  I overdid the "chocolate" on the bottom, but I think you'll get the gist of what I'm getting at. http://tinyurl.com/7ulp2qn

Sounds great from the off - very hooky ! Listening on lappy it all translates well, maybe a little lacking in lows, but like I say, lappy speakers so make of that what you will. Much as I like the hook I found it going on a bit too long at the end, could maybe use a little variation in there, just to keep it interesting.

Once again, thanks for your additional comments. I agree the lows were maybe a little bit lacking, so ive backed off the highpass filter on the piano and added a tiny tad of lower bottom end (thanks for that pointer jsaras) and i agree starise, so ive shortened the last chorus before the break and added some of the intro guitar at the end.

http://soundcloud.com/spa...her-v2-shorter/s-1rpGf

I prefer the layout of the song now, but have no clue as to whether the mix actually sounds any better or whether i have ruined it as my monitoring environment is not the best in the world and i have now heard each version about 796 times lol so cant hear for listening anymore!

Anyhow, have two mixes/versions to choose from now so once again, thanks for your input everybody 

And if anyone can tell me how to use the soundcloud flac from within sonar export without it telling me that my audio disk has run out of space, that would be cool too as a lossless version would be a nicer version to post


Cheers

Bibs

what they said^^^^^

nice work

WOW ! Very cool song , this one really should be radio active . I really could not find a thing out of place in your song , great stuff !

Radio

Loved the intro. Has a British 60s feel to it (imo). "Oh she loves you" seems to be a little redundant to me. Great mix, sound and played very well.