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Laura Lee

Hope you enjoy our latest original song.
 
Laura Lee
 
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Laura Lee
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V1
There's a girl who keeps my heart in a jar
She's my world, I admire from afar
But she's unaware of my non-reciprocal stare
 
Ch
I'm watching that Laura Lee
I wish she would notice me
The world is lush with Laura Lee
I wish our love could be something the world could see
 
V2
There's a girl she's the light of my life
And one day I will make her my wife
But she wouldn't know, I can't even say 'hello'
 
Ch
 
Middle bit
One gloomy day, she looked my way
When she spoke I was too afraid to say 
What was on my mind for she might be unkind and ruin my love for Laura Lee
 
V3
I took a chance, worked up the courage to talk
I asked her to dance, she told me to take a walk
She broke my heart, I had no chance from the start
 
Ch
I'm thinking of Laura Lee
I wish she had noticed me
The world is lush with Laura Lee
I wish that I could be together with Laura Lee
But it was not to be..
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    philz
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 09:52:15 (permalink)
    Really liked this one guys.  Lovely tune, well played by all and a sparkling production to top it all off.
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 09:57:20 (permalink)
    Noice!
     
    I like it and (as far as I know) all of the ones Daryl sings lead on.  They all remind me of something (though remembering what isn't happening - lol).
     
    How close to a full album are you?  I'd buy it!
     
     

     
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 10:00:01 (permalink)
    Ha!  Crisis Du Jour just started playing.  DEFINITE Madness feel (and I like Madness). 

     
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 11:00:41 (permalink)
    Thanks Philz and craigb(ITYRN).
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 12:02:17 (permalink)
    As usual, a pleasant, understated, dynamic and clean production. Nice acoustic guitar work, Ed. Is the tambourine sampled? It sounds good, so I'm assuming it is.


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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 15:53:49 (permalink)
    craigb
    Noice!
     
    I like it and (as far as I know) all of the ones Daryl sings lead on.  They all remind me of something (though remembering what isn't happening - lol).
     
    How close to a full album are you?  I'd buy it!
     
     


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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 15:56:37 (permalink)
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    Noice!
     
    I like it and (as far as I know) all of the ones Daryl sings lead on.  They all remind me of something (though remembering what isn't happening - lol).
     
    How close to a full album are you?  I'd buy it!
     
     


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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 16:04:02 (permalink)
    Just finish that album I want, that will be payment enough! 

     
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 17:22:22 (permalink)
    hope you don't mind me commenting...
    So, I didn't really care for this song... yet still nicely done! 
    I really liked some of the other songs that you have on your SC site!
    Very Pro sounding... all around really great works! When I have more time I will check out more of your songs!
    "Happy people" was great! and the "Xmas is coming" nicely surprised me. :)
    I keep thinking I should thank you.. lol, I think that it's just nice to hear really pro works here...
     
    This is what I expected from many people here.... :) I needed this!
     
    peace!
     
     

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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 17:46:14 (permalink)
    Made me sad for poor daryl, sittin there and no gull.
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/25 21:37:43 (permalink)
    I like it!

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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/26 08:38:29 (permalink)
    Very nice guys! Has all of the hallmarks I expect from you.
     
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/26 09:09:06 (permalink)
    Sounds great !! Nice work guys , music and vocals top notch .

    J.S.
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/27 10:23:23 (permalink)
    craigb
    Ha!  Crisis Du Jour just started playing.  DEFINITE Madness feel (and I like Madness). 


    I like Madness too
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/27 13:19:53 (permalink)
    Nice one chaps, is the vox double tracked Daryl? Thanks for sharing.

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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/27 14:46:57 (permalink)
    Pleasant indeed. I like the mix very much, cool organ pad tucked under just the right amount, glues it all together.
     
    I liked the bgv in the chorus sections better than in the verse, the bgv's poke out a bit for me during the verse. Maybe a tasteful flanging or a dip in their volume?
     
    However with Daryl's voice, more is more, so it's all good. Nice job to all!
     
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/29 18:02:59 (permalink)
    philz
    Really liked this one guys.  Lovely tune, well played by all and a sparkling production to top it all off.




    cheerz Philz
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/29 19:12:07 (permalink)
    Very pleasant sounding song to listen to, and very nicely performed by all.
    Well done!

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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/30 03:46:43 (permalink)
    Sweet

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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/08/31 11:16:16 (permalink)
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    Noice!
     
    I like it and (as far as I know) all of the ones Daryl sings lead on.  They all remind me of something (though remembering what isn't happening - lol).
     
    How close to a full album are you?  I'd buy it!
     
     


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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/09/02 20:02:57 (permalink)
    I really like this one guys - this reminds me a lot of early Pink Floyd. I think this is actually the best I've heard from you all - it's really great.

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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/09/04 14:06:39 (permalink)
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    Noice!
     
    I like it and (as far as I know) all of the ones Daryl sings lead on.  They all remind me of something (though remembering what isn't happening - lol).
     
    How close to a full album are you?  I'd buy it!
     
     


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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/09/04 14:54:14 (permalink)
    Wonderful song, your best yet I think. Acoustic guitar fills and raindrop piano - sublime.

     
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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/09/05 11:33:43 (permalink)
    This is a really beautiful tune.  You guys have this sound all to yourselves and it's a good one!

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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/09/05 15:24:06 (permalink)
    Just.....wow!
    Excellent. Really nice song and performances all around. Love the vocals, really I like everything about this song.
    Production is top notch, killer sound. How do you get that acoustic guitar sound?
    And, I must say, I'm impressed by anyone who can write a song with the words "non-reciprocal" in it and make it work.
    Great job guys!

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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/09/07 09:12:41 (permalink)
    bitflipper
    As usual, a pleasant, understated, dynamic and clean production. Nice acoustic guitar work, Ed. Is the tambourine sampled? It sounds good, so I'm assuming it is.


    Bapu's been on a mixing roll and did an excellent job on this, but of course in a reciprocal way......(had to use that word just once in my life.) 

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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/09/07 17:08:20 (permalink)
    cool little song and nice mix. hiss on vocals though, which you do a great job to mask Ed ( assume )

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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/09/07 21:41:37 (permalink)
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    Made me sad for poor daryl, sittin there and no gull.


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    Re: Laura Lee 2016/09/08 14:29:07 (permalink)
    Now I want Laura Lee, back off b*tches!!!

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