Thanks all for your feedback. with regards to the vocals, I used baby bluebottle mic and izotope nectar to shape the sound. I think I read in the forum here about there being a sweet spot at 5k and 10k on equaliser and that Vocals on commercial tracks tend to boost these, so I did the same.
I think I could have spent more time automating to get a more level volume and there are some parts where it feels like the vocals gets a bit hot, and also sometimes words are lost depending on what headphones or speakers it's played through.
Also, next time I will try to stand further away from the mic. Whilst I got a great sound in places by being up close, I think it also resulted in some pops and hisses here and there.