My July 2017 song is "You Make It Easy To Be Sweet"
https://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat/song/28413976-you-make-it-easy-to-be-sweet
 
Cheers,
Terry
 
 
I have completed every thing from start to finish. Thanks to Cakewalk
 
You make it easy to be sweet

I wanna tell your wonderful
You mean the world to me
So incredibly beautiful
In every way I know and see
I think about you all the time
When ever I'm away
I need you like a poat needs a rhyme
Like a flower needs a summer day

Chorus

You make it easy to be sweet
So very easy to be sweet

I wanna tell you it's lavishing
All you give to me
So amazingly ravishing
In every way that one can be

Repeat Chorus

Yeah you make me wanna be a better man
Yeah in every way that I can
 
 

Hey Terry, as usual this is a terrific demo -- well mixed and recorded.  I like how you add 'little bits' to the arrangement in the verses to build to the chorus.  But, I was disappointed in the chorus as it was not as catchy as need be for the rest of the song.  Of course, others might disagree. ~~ Allan