3rd mix, un-mastered, final arrangement,
it's got to be topped and tailed, has an extra 30 seconds or so at the end.
 
i think the bass line is too strong, so i need some feedback on that...
and the final chorus needs to be louder.
 
also, looking for translation issues at this point,
before mastering.
 
this song is supposed to be a sort of 'pick me up' for anyone feeling blue.
 
https://soundcloud.com/bats-brew/on-ur-way-3

The mix sounds quite dense here Bat's, not quite got the same open spacey feel most of your stuff has, arrangement sounds good, not hearing bass dominating.

On my Bose cans the kick, bass and snare are working fine together.
Compared it to a mix a buddy of mine is pretty happy with and the bass
is about the same, "right there", but not over the top.
Well done!
Master it up and move along...
 
T

Wookiee
The mix sounds quite dense here Bat's, not quite got the same open spacey feel most of your stuff has, arrangement sounds good, not hearing bass dominating.

hey wookiee,
thanks for the feedback...
do you think this is TOO dense?
and if so, how would you thin it out to get to where you would want it?
lose a guitar part?
less gain on the guitar parts?
maybe use an acoustic for one of the rhythms?
 
the drums i'm stuck with, 
and they have a big room sound attached to them.
maybe i should lose all verb on everything except the drums?
 
just thinking out loud here.....