Thanks all!
John B, glad the video fits it for you. Thanks for the comments!
Bats, and
Eph, you both took a look at the piano/mixing of piano, and I agree the piano is the most troubling part of this. I went with the Woodchester piano, which is a Kontakt instrument felt piano. Hammer hitting felt hitting strings. I personally think that particular tonality fits a winter mood. On my little piano at home, I usually play all felted up.
However, the listener is expecting "real piano" in a song, and so something seems wrong somehow. I get that. Don't know what to do there. I did try it with a real piano, but "felt" that felt was the winter choice here.
And as I learned, mixing a felt piano is difficult. Or at least the Woodchester was for me. Probably, the less you do to it with plug-ins, the better it sounds. Compression makes the initial transient a mile high. I can still hear a few spots that pop too much on the initial strike of the hammer.
So, good vote for better piano sounds, I will mull it over. Many thanks there!
James, many thanks. I was shooting for sumpin' pretty. A nice chill-out.
Foggy! Many thanks for the ideas! The goal on this was not to get right to it, so much. This is a slow pour of an adult beverage at the end of a long day. It's four minutes of looking out a window. Your advice I think stands true for anything aiming for top 40 territory or even just tight songwriting in general.
As for developing melodies off of melodies, and themes off of themes, you might find my other funk rock stuff more appealing. I'm on overkill mode on those . . . there's 12 themes at once when only three would clearly do. :) Again, thanks for the listen and thoughts, much obliged.
Starise, much appreciate the kind words.
Paul Galtieri Bros, any work of mine that you can connect to any Talking Heads effort is super appreciated! They are in my top 5 of all time. Thanks!
Wayfarer, Ha! I wish I could globe trot and film beauty!!! Good question though, they are clips off the rack as it were. Thanks for checking it out . . .
Daryl, much obliged, glad you liked it . . .
cheers,
and happy Thanksgiving to y'all if it's your thing.
-Tom