Hi Everybody,
This is the third track off my new double album, "Incessant Absurdity", which is finally finished.  All ears and critiques are welcome-thanks.
 
https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v4/player.cfm?songID=13787632
 

Like it. It’s got a weird, raw energy about it - both the playing and singing. It almost sounds like a live band. Nice little hook and clever lyrics. There a small drummer madness thing at 3:12 or so - part of what makes this sound live. Fun song. Vocals strain in parts and that gives a Ray Davies feel (way before your time I’m sure). Good job!

Mannynyagain - Thanks for listening - and thanks for your comments and critiques.

Something sounds way out of tune, possibly the bass.  I recognize that issue instantly, because I've done it so many times.  

Voda La Void - Thanks for telling me about the out of tune bass - I fixed it and it sounds a lot better.  Thanks again.

Go Tom Petty. Nice tune.

This song has a nice Classic Rock Type of Vibe going for it .
It drew me in as it unfolded .
I don't sing ..I wish I could ...in a few sections I would get Raw and raspy ..but like I said I don't sing
 
very nice
 
Kenny

Douglas,
The chorus is quite catchy and it's still  in my head some 30 min after listening. Nice.
Excellent vocal too. I really got into this song.

Yeah, Ray Davies like vocal.
 
For my taste the drums are a little lost.

Doug,
 
Cool track, you do sound a lot like Tom Petty in this vocal performance.    The drums are buried but otherwise sounds good.