Dave,
My two cents...
I think equipment lists are overrated. I think they tend to expose weaknesses when comparing to "PRO" sites. If you have all vintage equipment and are trying show that, then I think it is useful. Otherwise I think it is filler. Why does anyone that your are recording care whether you have sonar x64 vs x86? Or a Studio Projects C1 vs MCA SP1?
I don't really have a useful counter-suggestion, though.
I also like studio sites that show a nice comfortable recording space. I don't know if that is part of your draw, but if it is, flaunt it.
Otherwise I think the site is fine.
On another note, I'm moving to the Melbourne area (from HI) Sold all my equipment, but kept my software. Hopefully we can meet up some time. Maybe try to get a Sonar or Reaper UG together. Looks like brandon is nearer to the gulf, though.
Ken