Hi forum folk
Here's a new song I wrote and recorded with the aid of a very nice solo from James (jamesg1213) Griffiths.
Nits and crits welcome
 
https://soundcloud.com/skyblueproductions/slice-of-paradise
 
Slice of Paradise
Written and performed by Staypress
Guitar solo by James Griffiths
V1
We've been a couple for so long
I forgot whats right, whats wrong
You've been selling me out
Fear uncertainty and doubt
Prechorus
...and I don't know why you get so defensive
You've got me going on a charm offensive
Chorus
Why upset the apple cart? We've got so much to give
We've got our little slice of paradise to live
V2
I used to be one in a million
You used to be so brilliant
You've got a prize for me
A medal for mediocrity
Prechorus
Chorus
Middle bit
Though we no longer love in the same way 
We show our love every single day
Chorus to end
 
with added fud

Love this song, thanks for asking me along mate

As always, consistent, catchy, and brilliant.  You two work together so well, you'd think that you were in a band.

This is neato!  I was expecting a little more testosterone in James's solo, but it suits the song fine.

Really well done. It’s so upbeat and catchy that the only thing that strikes me weird is the line “though we no longer love in the same way”. Not sure what that means and it’s none of my business, but it seems like a bit of a buzz kill. Maybe, just maybe I have totally taken this all wrong - would not be the first time. Good tune, terrific playing and singing.

Mannynyagain
It’s so upbeat and catchy that the only thing that strikes me weird is the line “though we no longer love in the same way”. Not sure what that means....

Oh, I totally get it. Every marriage or other romantic relationship grows a little cold over time. You still love each other, but it's not the fiery kind of love you once had. It's more refined for some when they realize there are more important things than romantic love such as trust, loyalty, and selflessness. For others it's not that at all but instead becomes more of a love of circumstances, a comfortable home life. It's fine--just different.
 
Good song guys. Well done.
 
Bill

jamesg1213
Love this song, thanks for asking me along mate

Thank you for your valued contribution mate

Nicely written and arranged, well captured and performed, excellent choice of tone from James on the lead.

All round  great track.

pie
 
eat the whole thing
 
crust and all
 
 
paradise pie
 
top echelon you

Lynn
As always, consistent, catchy, and brilliant.  You two work together so well, you'd think that you were in a band.

haha - thanks Lynn. I really appreciate it mate