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  • Slice of Paradise - new original song (p.4)
2018/11/10 11:22:57
daryl1968
bjornpdx
Catchy tune in a laid back style, just the way a song should be.
I like the "medal for mediocrity" I have a trophy case full of them.


Haha. You and me both.
Thanks Bjorn
2018/11/11 15:51:03
daryl1968
cwestmont
This is great.  It has the whole package -- good lyrics, catchy hooks, solid instrumentation, and the vocals are a good match with the tune.  Like the hot ending. 
 
Well done guys. 


Thanks so much.
2018/11/11 15:58:39
dougk1824
I really liked the lyrics and chorus - the arrangement of the song as well. I enjoy your vocal - it's laid back.
2018/11/11 19:58:07
daryl1968
Johnbee58
Daryl, you most definitely have your own sound.  All of the songs I've heard of yours have something in them that links them together, sound wise.  That's what I love about the great Burt Bacharach.  You know from the first bar or two that it's a Bacharach song.  Yours are becoming that way too.  Not saying all of your tunes sound the same, but are in the same style and same overall sound.  The Staypress Sound.  Be proud of it.
 



Your comments made my day :)
Thanks so much John
2018/11/12 13:21:07
daryl1968
Serious_Noize!
Enjoyed hearing this one very much! The Vocals are right in front of you and easy to hear. That's not always the case in a lot of songs. But what I really like, while the vocals are right in front, you can still hear everyone else also. I'm no mix master that's for sure, but I like what I hear with the mix. 
 
Even more so, I love the song!!! 
 


Thanks so much Bobby my mate.
2018/11/12 15:12:24
Mesh
Daryl me mate, you write such catchy tunes and this one just flows so smoothly. The chorus just sticks in your head.....lovely stuff. That 'guitarist' has put a very nice vibe to this track. Well done gents, me likey!! 
2018/11/12 17:55:33
bapu
Naiz juan boyz.
Fud? Oh, i see what you did there.
2018/11/13 10:25:46
daryl1968
Freddy J
Love does mature in different ways but still can be there.  This is nothing but a terrific number.  I tried really hard to come up with a crit. but just couldn't find one.   Parts of this song remind me a bit of Brazil '66 and I love them.  You two have really put out some great songs but I would put this one at the top of the list.  Excellent!!!


Wow. Thanks so much Freddy
2018/11/14 16:14:42
daryl1968
the_user_formally_known_as_glennbo
Really clean mix. Cool song too. Like the middle bit where it drops to just bass and synth for a minute.




Thanks a lot Glennbo
2018/11/14 22:35:21
daryl1968
Leizer
Great work, mate! Every sound is a piece of art, dipped in saturation and mixed together to an quirky master-piece (pun embedded). Catchy chorus with the portamento synth following the bass living it up. Great playing as well, James! Lovely transition from wild west solo back to the chorus.


Awww thanks so much Lasse. Very nice of you pal.
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