Great lyrics. I really like reflective songs on the passing seasons. They take on a whole lot of sobering meaning when your age starts getting up there!
I think you did a great job with the orchestration. Maybe not that complex, but the parts fit together well.
I find myself preferring synth strings (or a string pad) over sampled strings, I guess because the sampled ones always sound too "scrape-y" to me. Well, just me I guess.