Thanks so much for the input and the ideas!  It really is helpful to get some outsider ears involved.
 
Keep'em coming and we'll get it closer and closer to as right as we can.
 
 

Well nice one here! The thing that leapt out at me was that neat, full bass. It just supports the song beautifully. I would turn it up  -just -a -skosh. Not more than a skosh!
 
Main vocal is a little dry, maybe the dreaded reverb needs to be turned up?
 
Maybe the snare, add a little top end back? IT could be brighter and still not f up the vocals.
 
It's a really really good mix!
 
-Tom

Lovely song.
 
Mixed well in my opinion.
 
Thanks for sharing.
 
Good Job!
 
paul

I think this mix is really good! Plenty of breathing room for all the parts, and everything sits nice and tidy. Great job!
 
Regards,
Dan