the Galtieri Brothers previously a trio is now reduced to the solitary songwriting figure of paulo. 
 
my latest effort 'lies of love' is linked below and is a song about the lies we tell when in love but the truth we find in the end. 
 
any comments or suggestions are appreciated + all musical shortcomings are mine. 
 
giddy up! 
 
paul 
 
lies of love

now with added lyrics.
 
lies of love
 
best wishes

Hi, Paul,
 
It's great to see you back on the forum again!
 
You've got a great sounding pop rocker here, with excellent songwriting, well thought out lyrics and dynamite musicianship!
 
The instrumental performances were really well done and the vocals were perfect for the genre.  The mix is fresh and modern sounding, and really well textured with radio-ready clarity.
 
Excellent work, my friend, have a great weekend!
Bob

Nice cows Paul, sounds OK here everything where it should be in the mix, nice and clear.

Paul
You have that pop sound going and it sounds good. You write really good lyrics too.
I think I'd drop that sort of bongo drum track.  When it ends in verse 3 you almost have a different song, a better one IMO.

Thanks Bob, its good to be back. The activity feed on BandLab is a bit of a head rush so I thought I'd come back to the clearer air of the forum for some better views and advice. Thanks for the kind comments.
 
Thanks Wookie, the picture is of cows on a relatives farm in Ireland. The comments from your furry ears are very much appreciated.
 
Thanks Bjorn, thanks for the idea of dropping the bongo track - I'll give it a go and see how it feels. Thanks again for collaborating; a new thing for you and me both.
 
Kind Regards
 
paul

Yeah it sounds good on my headphones, especially the chorus part opens wide.
It's not my genre but the production is great :)

Thanks for listening Harry.
 
Your comments are much appreciated!
 
regards
 
paul

Good song Paul. Lyrics are spot on.

Thanks Daryl, it's good to have your heart broken from time to time.
 
regards
 
paul