Thanks Bill,
 
I wrote this one when I was banished to my garden shed; it was then I realised that 'for better or for worse' did not relate to my singing ;-)
 
Thanks Arlen,
 
Thank you both for your kind comments which are really appreciated.
 
regards
 
paul

Hi Paul,
You have got a great pop song going here!  The melody is a real stick-in-your-head grabber.  Your vocals are excellent  - great timing and delivery - as are the harmonies.  You have strong hooks that should attract all listeners.  The mix is also very good.  I don't know if this is your first effort as a solo but it is doggone good!

Hi Freddy,
 
Thank you for your kind comments.
 
Glad you liked the hooks.
 
regards
 
paul

This manages to tell a tough reality in a soft acceptable way. Going high on "lies" was an interesting musical way to bring that harsh reality to the surface, yet it doesn't seem so harsh when sang in that way.
Overall a pleasant listen. You guys have a fresh light sound that manages to pull me into it.

I really like the song! great vocals! For me I would like it to rock out, and it would work to! Nice job!!!
 
 

Hi Starise,
 
You got the idea spot on + expressed it better than I ever could.
 
Glad it pulled you in.
 
Hi Foggy,
 
Thanks for your kind comments + the idea to rock it out.
 
I will try it sometime.
 
Both your feedback is really appreciated.
 
regards
 
paul