It is not that bad. Exactly what else could be said ... that would be better. Pretty basic, but if you are coming to wiki to learn about buying SONAR you are pretty limited in your imagination. For something contemporary like SONAR it is better to provide links than go into too much detail.
I have a hard enough time just keeping my father's entry corrected (he played for OU and everyone in OK is an expert). I can only imagine how hard it would be to keep up SONAR's entry.
One thing I can say is run it by Cake first - or at least here on the forums. They can get it locked as "owner" of SONAR, but I'd rather have them working on SONAR than spending time on Wiki.
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