Mix sounds OK here chaps.

I'm starting to like this British Dance Hall style. Of course, 
Beatles, so coolness right there.
 
Hey that was a tasty guitar solo.
 
I'd look a little at the bgv's, they are there but don't seem to add much. They are not very loud. The lead vocal is plenty up front, and to my taste, could use a little processing, maybe just a touch of slapback delay, or something in the light microshifting dept. . . . that free Izotope doubler might be worth a try. I dunno. It's not like it's broken the way it is. Just a thought.
 
vocal delivery certainly doesn't lack energy and interest, very well done there.
 
cheers! 
-Tom

Wookiee
Mix sounds OK here chaps.

Wookie - Thanks for listening and for your input. 
 

emeraldsoul
I'm starting to like this British Dance Hall style. Of course, 
Beatles, so coolness right there.
 
Hey that was a tasty guitar solo.
 
I'd look a little at the bgv's, they are there but don't seem to add much. They are not very loud. The lead vocal is plenty up front, and to my taste, could use a little processing, maybe just a touch of slapback delay, or something in the light microshifting dept. . . . that free Izotope doubler might be worth a try. I dunno. It's not like it's broken the way it is. Just a thought.
 
vocal delivery certainly doesn't lack energy and interest, very well done there.
 
cheers! 
-Tom

Hi Tom, I appreciate your taking the time to listen to the song and for your kind words. Because of some comments on another forum, I was on the fence about the guitar solo. I tried playing something else, but nothing seemed to work. So your comment has helped me be more at ease about it. 
 
About the BGVs -- we (the collaborators) haven't discussed that yet. But we will, I'm sure, and necessary adjustments may be made. 
 
On the lead vox -- I just got the vocal doubler for free, so I may try that and see how it goes. I usually like to go light on vocal effects, so we'll see how that works. 
 
Thanks again, 
Sean

I updated the mix with minor changes based on suggestions. 
https://soundcloud.com/sean-peifer/walking-mix-9

Well done. Oddball tune with a wacky (but appropriate) vocal . All playing is terrific. I could see this playing as ending credits roll on some obscure indy film. Very original - a modern day Sopwith Camel.

Mannynyagain
Well done. Oddball tune with a wacky (but appropriate) vocal . All playing is terrific. I could see this playing as ending credits roll on some obscure indy film. Very original - a modern day Sopwith Camel.

Mannynyagain - Hey, thanks for listening and for the nice comments. This started as an "experimental" song for me. It is gratifying that you enjoy it. - Sean

I'm hearing 'Sergeant Peppers' too.
 
Liked the walking bass but not the piano sound.
 
Nice guitar solo - thanks for sharing.
 
Good Job!
 
paul
 
 

I enjoyed the song - the lead vocal reminded me of Dennis DeYoung.  Excellent guitar solo.  The mix sounded very nice to my ears.

thegaltieribrothers
I'm hearing 'Sergeant Peppers' too.
Liked the walking bass but not the piano sound.
Nice guitar solo - thanks for sharing.
Good Job!
paul
 

Paul - Thanks for listening and the nice comments. 
 
- Sean
 

dougk1824
I enjoyed the song - the lead vocal reminded me of Dennis DeYoung.  Excellent guitar solo.  The mix sounded very nice to my ears.

dougk1824 - I'm really glad you enjoyed the song. I actually have quite a people say I sound like DeYoung. I was able to improve the mix quite a bit from helpful comments. Thanks for the listen. 
- Sean