Fun song. I've thought of doing the narration bit in a song too, but I'm not sure I could pull it off as well as you. Anyway, good job with it. I enjoy listening to what others do that I can't. Takes all kinds to make the world go round.
 
Bill

This is so beatnik! And, its a happening.
 
Chorus totally works. Vocals come through really clearly!  
 
Whoa, random lady singer! Cool!
 
My least favorite part is the first thirty seconds. Leading with old guy "rap" is a risk. But then, here comes the groove, and then, the kitchen sink!!! Smiling big now.
 
I love the mix for its clarity. Nothing is buried or muddy. Great job there!
 
cheers,
-Tom

Thanks all - appreciate it