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  • Children's Song (p.3)
2018/10/09 00:20:58
Freddy J
I love this number!  The lyrics are absolutely terrific and the melody really caries the song.  The guitar playing is also terrific and the sparse instrumentation really adds to the overall song by concentrating attention on the lyrics and vocal.  BTW, your vocal sound very good in the version I heard.  It isn't always necessary to reach each and every note or to hold notes perfectly for 20 minutes at top volume.  Rather, in MHO, it is the presentation and delivery!  There have been many famous singers/musicians that didn't have what might be perceived as perfect voices but they could deliver and sell a song.  Does the name Louise Armstrong strike a familiar note.  So go ahead and use your voice and post more song with vocals.  This one was great!
2018/10/09 00:43:09
jimfogle
It is a very cute, well written song.  I like you're singing on it and the sparse arrangement.  Very interesting melody.  I hope you'll be inspired to write more songs like this one.
2018/10/09 00:49:44
jimfogle
I forgot to say one thing, I REALLY appreciate your listing a genre.
 
(Gets on soapbox)  There is a large diversity of song genres available on this forum, some I like a lot, some not so much.  It is nice to have a hint about what I might hear to help me decide what to listen to.  (Steps off soapbox).
2018/10/09 23:15:49
Wayfarer
Thanks for not hating it guys. If I could sing as well as some of you, my size 15 feet would seem tiny compared to the size of my head, which only goes to show the good Lord knew what he was doing when he gave me this voice. I still wouldn't sing in public, but at least I'm not afraid to sing in front ya'll here anymore. :)
 
Bill
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