Hi All
 
Here is a new song that I came up.  Please me know what you think.
 
Thanks
 
https://soundcloud.com/th...ost/take-my-heart-away

Not too shabby! I like the bounce. In the non-vocal spots you might bring the percussion (and hand claps) up a bit in the mix.
 
The vocals are cool and trippy but can't always make out the lyrics. Any chance you could augment it with some regular, non-autotuned vocals? You could call-and-response them, mix it back and forth? Just a thought.
 
After 1:42. in this section you have something like an electronic cowbell or blip on the "four" - you could make more of that in the mix. Just another thought . . .
 
It won't be to everyone's taste with the vocal effects but I liked it. Nice job.
 
-Tom
 
 

Not my kind of music, but from my limited perspective, it seemed really good for that genre.
 
Bill

very big
 
very thick
 
nice vocals
 
dance off yourself
 
this makes me happy
 
who are you?
 
make your way to me
 
ok
 
glow unto thyself biscuit

Hi All
 
Thanks for your comments.