2018/09/09 11:46:13
Starise
This one took awhile to make because I had a melody that sounded lonely and I liked the way those words " Alone Again" fit. I couldn't figure out why the person in the song was lonely so I made the lyrics a kind of generic thing about anyone who is missing their loved one. The lyric ended up being very basic....as is the entire song.
I tried stretching this to a set time for drums but it just didn't seem to be working. I could hear drums in it. Ok without too I guess.
 
https://soundcloud.com/starise/alone-again
2018/09/09 14:49:38
dougk1824
I really liked the spacing of the different instruments in the mix - lots of depth to my ears.  It's a good song - works fine without drums.  Nice job on lead vox too.
2018/09/09 20:45:19
bapu
Naiz juan Tim.
 
Agree with Doug, doesn't "NEED" drums. Kind of cool mixture of Zeppish and Ian Annerson to me.
2018/09/13 14:12:31
Starise
Thanks for listening and the comments guys!
2018/09/25 20:08:41
stevec
That was really good, Tim.  It has your usual Celtic/acoustic flair but with a bit something more...  Reading the comments on SC I think it was a good move to dry up the vocals a little - they set against the more ambient music quite well.    Oh, and the vocals themselves sound very good. 
2018/09/26 01:01:31
emeraldsoul
You posted this earlier I believe? If so, it sounds better now. Vocals pop out, and it's a very strong performance. Don't need the drums. Did I reference Peter Gabriel last time? Your song is 100% emotion and it works.
 
It's a seriously good mix. Liked the synth cello bass thing that fills up the bottom end in spots. 
 
cheers,
-Tom
2018/09/26 05:17:06
eph221
It's difficult when you're all alone and NOT a misanthrope.
2018/09/26 11:34:33
daryl1968
sorry I missed this first time around Tim.
This is great - definitely no drums - it works as it is imo.
If you really want suggestions, maybe some backing vocals/vocal harmonies coming in later in the song?
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