Hi fabulous folks
The Forum Monkeys are
Mesh, Bapu and Daryl1968
 
Here is our latest original song. 
We hope you enjoy it.
 
https://soundcloud.com/fo...ove-will-come-your-way
 
Love Will Come Your Way
© 2016 D. Greenway & E. Kocol
 
Verse 1
As a kid, back then, growing up was a lonely place
Heavy bones, back then, greasy hair and a chubby face
 
Pre chorus
Then a friend said to me 
'One day you'll be happy' and...
 
Chorus
'Love will come your way
If you just wait on fate
Love will come your way
and not a day too late'
 
Verse 2
As a teen, back then, growing pains and a blotchy face
Just fourteen and then girls were like an alien race
 
Pre-chorus
Chorus
 
Bridge
So in time I raised my game
Found a girl who felt the same
 
Verse 3
Now I'm grown and grey, found a girl who never ran away
Had some kids now they see love in my old way
 
Final prechorus
Now I say to my son
'One day you'll find the one and......
 
Chorus x2
 
 

First thought; "This sounds radio ready!"
Nice song, story, instrumentation and arrangement. The vocals sit nicely in the mix and I really like how the drums stand out.
Throw in a C# on that bass line and you'll have the icing on the cake!
Great job by all!

String Jammer
First thought; "This sounds radio ready!"
Nice song, story, instrumentation and arrangement. The vocals sit nicely in the mix and I really like how the drums stand out.

Thanks Scotty.

String Jammer
Throw in a C# on that bass line and you'll have the icing on the cake!

Done.

Excellent tune, perfect performances and a spot on production.  Everything sits just right on this one.

Solid!  Very compact and well-crafted piece.  The lyrics resonate well for me as well, gents.  

Sounds nice here, perhaps a little lite in the lower mid's that could be me, quality mix as always, thanks for sharing.

This is amazing. It has a real organic feel and is full of emotion. I wish I could write like this. I will be sharing this song with my friends. I have now followed you bunch.

 
a good song well performed, well done lads

I heard the Monkeys had new material out! 
 
Nice.