Hope you enjoy our latest original song.
 
Laura Lee
 
The Players:
Daryl - Vocals, Drums, Keys
Mesh - Electric Guitar - Lead Guitar
Ed - Acoustic Guitars, Bass
 
Laura Lee
(c) 2016 D. Greenway & E. Kocol 

V1
There's a girl who keeps my heart in a jar
She's my world, I admire from afar
But she's unaware of my non-reciprocal stare
 
Ch
I'm watching that Laura Lee
I wish she would notice me
The world is lush with Laura Lee
I wish our love could be something the world could see
 
V2
There's a girl she's the light of my life
And one day I will make her my wife
But she wouldn't know, I can't even say 'hello'
 
Ch
 
Middle bit
One gloomy day, she looked my way
When she spoke I was too afraid to say 
What was on my mind for she might be unkind and ruin my love for Laura Lee
 
V3
I took a chance, worked up the courage to talk
I asked her to dance, she told me to take a walk
She broke my heart, I had no chance from the start
 
Ch
I'm thinking of Laura Lee
I wish she had noticed me
The world is lush with Laura Lee
I wish that I could be together with Laura Lee
But it was not to be..

Really liked this one guys.  Lovely tune, well played by all and a sparkling production to top it all off.

Noice!
 
I like it and (as far as I know) all of the ones Daryl sings lead on.  They all remind me of something (though remembering what isn't happening - lol).
 
How close to a full album are you?  I'd buy it!
 
 

Ha!  Crisis Du Jour just started playing.  DEFINITE Madness feel (and I like Madness). 

Thanks Philz and craigb(ITYRN).

As usual, a pleasant, understated, dynamic and clean production. Nice acoustic guitar work, Ed. Is the tambourine sampled? It sounds good, so I'm assuming it is.

craigb
Noice!
 
I like it and (as far as I know) all of the ones Daryl sings lead on.  They all remind me of something (though remembering what isn't happening - lol).
 
How close to a full album are you?  I'd buy it!
 
 

Cheers Craig (I'll pay you later)

daryl1968

craigb
Noice!
 
I like it and (as far as I know) all of the ones Daryl sings lead on.  They all remind me of something (though remembering what isn't happening - lol).
 
How close to a full album are you?  I'd buy it!
 
 

Cheers Craig (I'll pay you later)

Out your share, not mine.

Just finish that album I want, that will be payment enough! 

hope you don't mind me commenting...
So, I didn't really care for this song... yet still nicely done! 
I really liked some of the other songs that you have on your SC site!
Very Pro sounding... all around really great works! When I have more time I will check out more of your songs!
"Happy people" was great! and the "Xmas is coming" nicely surprised me. :)
I keep thinking I should thank you.. lol, I think that it's just nice to hear really pro works here...
 
This is what I expected from many people here.... :) I needed this!
 
peace!