you might get a little more "p" coming through on the "up" -
this is cool and I like it, it's surprising. Lots of good vocal effect work. There are spots where I can't understand the lyrics through the melodyne - :35- :40 illustrates this - although mostly I do get the lyrics (from memory at least!) it's usually clear. Just a few spots where the sheen takes the clarity away.
I do like the reggae vibe! good luck with it!
-Tom