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  • Poisoning The People (ROCK)
2018/08/20 06:27:33
HarryC
Listen here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B4E4xh6_eUc
 
I would like to know, what you think about the song and mix.
Thanks
2018/08/28 16:24:32
HarryC
No Rock Fans here?
2018/08/28 16:55:32
Mesh
Hi Harry, I liked it. On the first & second listen, I thought there was a timing issue on the intro, but it grew on me and transitioned nicely into to tune. Nice clear mix/production and could hear all the individual instruments (on my headphones). The lyrics are also very appropriate for the times.
 
Good work my man, I enjoyed this!!  
2018/09/08 08:03:42
HarryC
Thank you Mesh!
2018/09/08 09:28:29
SupaReels Music
O.k I've listened to this on monitors and my DT 770s. I have to agree with MESH in that there seems to be a timing issue twixt vocal and guitars but only IMO.
 
I like this genre 'cause it has passion and hard high octane guitar & vocal work, it's there in this song, but it feels like it lacks power, it might be your overuse of limiters or maybe too much even balance regarding the mix ... don't know, however under that blanket of constructive critic it's a great song ( B U T it needs to grow a pair )
2018/09/08 14:20:24
HarryC
Hey SupaReels, thank you for listening and your constructive critic. I need these informations to get better
Maybe you feel the timing issue at the transition to chorus from 4/4 to 3/4 bar (at 0:42)? The Song is in 4/4 except the chorus is in 3/4 time. It could sounds a bit unusual but it should fit so far. What do you think?
2018/09/09 00:13:54
MarkusClinus
Hi Harry - a bit heavy for my taste - but I like this - I think it sounds pretty tight.
2018/09/09 04:53:36
Wayfarer
Lyrically it wasn't really my thing (wait, do I even have a thing?), but I thought the music was good and interesting, especially the drums, which were very well recorded too.
 
Bill
2018/09/09 21:00:52
bapu
All I can say is I listened to the song and came away with wanting more drums, less boxy sounding guitar and a better bass song.
 
Vocal (for this genre) were pretty spot on though. 
2018/09/10 06:43:38
HarryC
Mark, Bill and Babu thank you guys. I like to take your criticism to heart and I will improve the next song
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