I tried to make something more energetic and this is what i came up with:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3hoxQvunJB0      its called "Overload"

Hi Chris,
This is really a good tune and loved the melodic lines. The mix was very good as well, translated nicely on my headphones. Had my to tapping throughout the whole track.
What synths did you use?
Keep up the good work!!  
 
 
EDIT: I'm also listening to your other tracks on YT and they're now on my afternoon play list. Very cool stuff! :) 

Hi Chris,
Nice tune. 
Listening on work headphones.
For the most part translates nicely. 
Around the 2 min mark, the drums seemed to blur (the change drums), but otherwise everything was great.
 

I was banging my head the whole time.  Really like your synths.  They sound thick and analog.