Tom (DeeringAmps) I like your mix a lot. It features the vocals better than the original. I put the backup vocals a little more out front and backed off the reverb on the instruments. Very easy to listen to and very musical.
Mr. Swift - On my system your mix is a little bass heavy. The bass is almost louder than the vocals (do you play bass?)
The vocals are nicely done not over treated but stand in there nicely. Did you not like the electric guitar? It is gone until the end. At one point the keys are out there alone until the very end! Then that electric comes in strong.
The mix seems a little compressed especially at the beginning. Or is this a gate?
AntManB - You should commit to mixes more often! This sounds really full. About the only thing I would do in your mix is maybe back off the reverb/delay on the lead and carve out EQ holes for the electric guitar and acoustic (Lead) so they stand out more...Just my opinion...
I only see three other mixes mine makes 4. Please critique mine...I want to learn and don't be afraid to tell me what you really think...But don't just say your mix sucks raw eggs, tell me WHY you think it sucks raw eggs and what I can do to fix it!