Nice song Doug. Mixwise, the flanged guitar that comes in the second verse jumps out as too loud to my ears.

Doug - I love this - the mix is really nice - great spacing and clarity - the playing and vocals are great. Good job.

daryl1968 - thanks for your comments and for listening - I'll give that lead on the second verse another couple of listens.
 
MarkusClinus - thanks for your kind comments and for listening.

Doug
Yeah very nice tune and your vocal comes across well. Not sure if the tyu-tyu-tyu  lyrics work.
Good production overall.

Hey, Doug,
 
This is a really cool, moody sounding alt rocker with excellent songwriting, great playing and singing, and a nice clean, pro sounding mix!
 
I really like the vocals on this and the guitar work was really tasty, I especially liked the trem stuff and the solo was great.
 
Nice one, Doug, really good song!
 
Bob

bjornpdx - Thanks for your comments and for listening.  The tyu's - maybe you're right about that
 
Bob Oister - Hey Bob - I hope all is well with you.  Thanks for your kind comments and for stopping by to give my song a listen.

I think this is very original. It conveys a message that works for me. I'd agree the electric piano? that comes in in the second verse is pretty loud.
 
Loved the trippy guitar solo.
 
During your "Alive Again" chorus? breaks, the electric piano riff might be coming in a shade early, just a smidge ahead of the groove, which sounds like the groove is just a hair behind the beat. Which is cool, just not with the elec piano coming in early. God help you if that makes any sense at all to you.  :)
 
I thought the drums were very very crisp and clean! A treat. Did you play them live?
 
cheers,
-Tom

emeraldsoul - Thanks for your comments and for listening.  The drums are midi - courtesy of Addictive Drums.