https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v4/player.cfm?songID=13761136
 
your summer will not last forever
your fall it just plods along
and winter rests like she is wont to do
her veins as cold as ice
 
And in her state will seem forever
best not to be aware
In the freeze all thoughts subside
until she sets you free
 
That's just the way the game is played
It's left inside it's self
So you can just cop a feel
and then you find yourself
but nobody cares
it's for real
but they will go on with the deal
 
and then the spring arrives
dancing with a smile
her laugh releases you
from Mother's frosty grasp
 

brilliant lyrics!

Vocal is a little woolly. Some mix issues here I think...a lot of the production sounds like it's coming from a hole in the ground. And I don't mean to be rude or coarse by that. I mean it seems far away and muffled. I think you should get the drums cracking, bring the bass in and go from there. The mix is a bit haphazard. Having said that...if this feel is what you're going for, then keep going.