Lazy Summer.

2018/06/29 14:51:49

Wookiee

Little pop number with verses and choruses no vocal though I respect your lives and ears 😊😎

Superior Drummer, Arturia's DX7 V, Cakewalk's Z3ta2+ and Rapture Pro.

Lazy Summer

2018/06/29 18:19:41

Wayfarer

I think it might sound better without the drums. They're kind of dreary sounding to me. Otherwise, well done. I like the lead synth sound a lot.

Bill

2018/06/30 08:37:33

biodiode

Composition wise it works well. The drums, on the other hand, don't seem to fit in especially the heavy snare. That aside a nice summery tune.

2018/06/30 08:46:56

Wookiee

Thanks Bill, thank Adrian, I did wonder if the snare was a little to in the face perhaps I can go and back it off a tad.

Appreciate the ears and the comments chaps.

2018/06/30 19:00:53

Freddy J

A nice, pleasant, and happy tune. I enjoyed this. Perhaps backing down on the snare might help or maybe using brushes (maybe????).

2018/07/01 08:50:13

Wookiee

Thanks Freddy. the snare is under consideration.

2018/07/01 12:41:01

michaelhanson

Nice composition Wook. I agree that the snare seemed just a little present in the mix. Maybe just choosing a different snare tone, something a little deeper might help to move it back just a tad.

2018/07/01 13:23:38

Wookiee

Thank you Mike, I am going to to go back and look but it is just to hot to work in the studio today, I have no AC in there so I am having a day chilling.

2018/07/02 06:07:00

RexRed

Lovely tune, a very nice listen! I dig the luscious echo synth that you used, it really melds everything together! :)

2018/07/02 08:07:03

Wookiee

Thanks Rex, Z3ta2+ was the synth used.

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