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2018/06/25 02:18:24
drma173
Hello supporters and haters ! I got a new music video up now hope you guys enjoy it. I 
credit to rich the kid for is beat and Tekashi. hope you haters now don't say I don't give 
CREDIT. THANKS FOR ALL THE HATES 

Edit by Wookiee : Warning Songs contain Strong language that may offend.
 
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2018/06/27 20:59:25
drma173
Why not comments?
2018/06/30 02:48:51
eph221
good one!
2018/06/30 04:06:39
Kamikaze
I don't get the trap thing, it's very much the flavour of the day, but in a day with so much available to personalise your sound, trap beats all sound the same.  I used t have an 808 and 909 emuatr in the 90's (Novatin Drumstation), but would run the output through cheap guitar pedals to create different textures. As I got into hip hop, I gt more into acoustic drums that were sampled. And the occasional analogue drum mixed in, such as a straight hi hat.  Part of me still likes analogue drum sounds, so I've been keeping an eye on FXpansions Tremor VST to go on sale. With something like that available, I can't understand why Trap beats aren't evolving. Surely pickking up the trap vibe and putting a twist on it would make a production stand out. 
 
I'm not keen no your vocals, the nasal tone was grating, and I'm not sure what effect you are trying to achieve by rapping this way, but it wasn't very listenable for me. As the reverb needs some work. I'm not sure yu'd reverb a vocal as I would, but I would go drier, and smaller. You probably want to look into how reverb and vocal prcessing is applied in your genre for ideas. 
 
The content was awful and cliche'd, so probably not going to get much positive feedback. It just makes you sound little. ****es and hoes all over the place loses it's power, if you are going use language like that, it should be more clever. In a Lyrics born rap battle track, he raps "afraid to say the ****ing f-word' the word play here is that he is using the F-word t describe the f-word". It maybe worth listening outside your genre of misogynistic foul languaged narcissistic rap for idea on making your rapping a bit mre evolved. I'm a  fan of Lyrics Born, Gift of Gab and Lateef, and their use of language, rhyming schemes, rhythmic phrasing. More lately Oddisee. I was never into Eminem, but his rhyming technique was clever. I would learn more about hw t play with this ideas, but your lyrical style is very simple. 
 

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
2018/06/30 04:19:49
Kamikaze

2018/06/30 04:49:43
Hugh Mann
Hard at work o n the next string of loops.
 

2018/06/30 04:52:57
Hugh Mann
Kamikaze
I don't get the trap thing, it's very much the flavour of the day, but in a day with so much available to personalise your sound, trap beats all sound the same.  I used t have an 808 and 909 emuatr in the 90's (Novatin Drumstation), but would run the output through cheap guitar pedals to create different textures. As I got into hip hop, I gt more into acoustic drums that were sampled. And the occasional analogue drum mixed in, such as a straight hi hat.  Part of me still likes analogue drum sounds, so I've been keeping an eye on FXpansions Tremor VST to go on sale. With something like that available, I can't understand why Trap beats aren't evolving. Surely pickking up the trap vibe and putting a twist on it would make a production stand out. 
 
I'm not keen no your vocals, the nasal tone was grating, and I'm not sure what effect you are trying to achieve by rapping this way, but it wasn't very listenable for me. As the reverb needs some work. I'm not sure yu'd reverb a vocal as I would, but I would go drier, and smaller. You probably want to look into how reverb and vocal prcessing is applied in your genre for ideas. 
 
The content was awful and cliche'd, so probably not going to get much positive feedback. It just makes you sound little. ****es and hoes all over the place loses it's power, if you are going use language like that, it should be more clever. In a Lyrics born rap battle track, he raps "afraid to say the ****ing f-word' the word play here is that he is using the F-word t describe the f-word". It maybe worth listening outside your genre of misogynistic foul languaged narcissistic rap for idea on making your rapping a bit mre evolved. I'm a  fan of Lyrics Born, Gift of Gab and Lateef, and their use of language, rhyming schemes, rhythmic phrasing. More lately Oddisee. I was never into Eminem, but his rhyming technique was clever. I would learn more about hw t play with this ideas, but your lyrical style is very simple. 
 

 

 
 That was really great advice with solid examples of how someone interested in that can improve.  Too bad its all wasted on that wanna-be juvenile delinquent.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 




2018/06/30 06:05:44
emeraldsoul
I can't help you with useful comments on the rap hip-hop stuff, and the theme isn't my thing. But I can tell you I listened to it the whole way through, and really dug the musical choices and the mix. Bass was present yet tight and controlled, and those little synth lead noodles were pretty captivating. Even if it's loop based it's a cool listen.
 
You seem to call out the haters when it's you yourself who are hating on women.  ?  Maybe that's what I don't really understand. Cool music, though.
 
 
2018/07/01 00:25:09
2:43AM
Don't care for the lyrics, but I do like the distortion/saturation on the bass line.  What's your technique?
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