You guys are way too nice. Way nicer than this putz deserves.  I guarantee the only talent there is from the producers that made the loops he uses.  The technique to achieve the sounds and mix?  lol.  Its already built in to the loops.  I don't understand encouraging this loser.  Whatever.

Hugh Mann
You guys are way too nice. Way nicer than this putz deserves.  I guarantee the only talent there is from the producers that made the loops he uses.  The technique to achieve the sounds and mix?  lol.  Its already built in to the loops.  I don't understand encouraging this loser.  Whatever.

Godda say just seen this comment from H/M ... an' totally agree, Won't make comment on the work as I'm not sure I'm comfortable with a judgment 

It's legit to offer comments regardless of the skill level involved, or the authenticity of the material. I have used some loops myself on occasion, as I bet most of us have. 
 
Plus I wanted to ask him about his hating on women in that song - it's a good opportunity to provoke some thinking. Who knows? Might not get very far there. But you never know.
 
cheers,
-Tom
 
 

I try to keep the lines of communication open, barring getting beaten up or killed.

emeraldsoul
It's legit to offer comments regardless of the skill level involved, or the authenticity of the material. I have used some loops myself on occasion, as I bet most of us have. 
 
Plus I wanted to ask him about his hating on women in that song - it's a good opportunity to provoke some thinking. Who knows? Might not get very far there. But you never know.
 
cheers,
-Tom
 
 

 All very valid points.  I agree and have also benefited from more experienced artists input.  Its the purpose of places like this.  However,  I was,  and most who post in places like this,  genuinely looking to improve and grow as an artist.  That is not the case with this putz. 
 
Any criticism and he reacts like a toddler.  Calling people that take the time offer genuine critiques and help f#gs and what not.  That s a disqualifier to me.  You  lose the privileged of having your music critiqued or being offered help when act like a total tool.  To top it off,  the only original "art' coming from this loser is his weak @ss 'rapping' and absurd lyrics.  The rest is loops that anyone can string together.  No real art in that. Unless your threshold for art is extremely low. 
 
Glorifying cowardly murder?  misogyny? this guy is the definition of a loser.  The kind of p#ssy that talks tough but really is a coward.  Afraid of women and only brave with a gun.  Cant stand that there are so many losers like this around.   The guy strives to be a cliche.   
 
like I said.  You all are way too nice. 

FYI  in case anyone is confusing me with this cat, it is not me.
 
i am jesse q. screed, and only jesse q. screed

I don't like rap / hip-hop, but I admit the music is kind of neat (however it was made).
 
As far as the lyric accusing women in general of being gold diggers, wasn't it Groucho Marx who said a wife was nothing but a prostitute on lifetime retainer? That's a sentiment that's been around forever whether we agree with it or not. Certainly there are a lot of women like that. It seems to me that half the women married to pro athletes, Hollywood actors, or for that matter, most of the richer doctors and lawyers I know in my own town have married for money. Some men do the same thing, though you don't see it nearly as much. What's wrong with writing songs about what you see? I could do without the profanity, but if that's what he truly sees, I have no problem with him saying it.
 
Bill

I love this hate from all ya losers. Keep em coming cause I'm still going to be making hits for ya.

drma173
I love this hate from all ya losers. Keep em coming cause I'm still going to be making hits for ya.

lol.  what a child.  How about u thank kamikaze for taking the time.  He gave you a great critique with solid examples of how to improve ur weak 'rapping' skills.  Or how about u thank ur two fans (God knows why they encourage ur dumb #ss). 
 
This mental toddler has his head so far up his own arse that he cant even show the slightest bit of gratitude or appreciation for others time and effort.  That is the epitome of a loser.   This was fun, but I wash my hands of thee.  Good luck and don't be a loser your whole life.  grow up son. 

Why I need to be thankful. No body here helped made this song. This is what I like when I make a good song people like you want to take the credit for somthing that you didn't do.