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2018/07/07 13:47:38
Hugh Mann
drma173
Why I need to be thankful. No body here helped made this song. This is what I like when I make a good song people like you want to take the credit for somthing that you didn't do.



You are unintentionally hilarious.  I'm a nice guy, so I'll give it one last shot. 
 
The reason you need to be thankful is that the best part of your 'music' is the loops you use.  Your 'rapping' and lyrics (the parts you actually made),  are very weak compared to pros (or anyone really. I can rap better than you, lol). 
 
As far as taking credit?  What the hell are you smoking, son?  That fake weed?  seems like it.  Its messing with your brain, cause i would not take credit for your crap, lol. 
 
You are operating under the delusion that you are very good and are making 'hits'.  you are not.  its crap. Anyone that remotely listens to rap can see your delivery is weak.  So weak.  Its really terrible dude.  You would be laughed out of any professional situation.  So you need to improve.  A lot.  You have tons of competition out there.  And they are all way better than you.  So you need to be thankful and listen to the critiques that are trying to help you improve.  You get it?  I know you don't and I just wasted my time.  So again,  I bid you adieu. 
2018/07/08 18:22:17
drma173
Hugh Mann
drma173
Why I need to be thankful. No body here helped made this song. This is what I like when I make a good song people like you want to take the credit for somthing that you didn't do.



You are unintentionally hilarious.  I'm a nice guy, so I'll give it one last shot. 
 
The reason you need to be thankful is that the best part of your 'music' is the loops you use.  Your 'rapping' and lyrics (the parts you actually made),  are very weak compared to pros (or anyone really. I can rap better than you, lol). 
 
As far as taking credit?  What the hell are you smoking, son?  That fake weed?  seems like it.  Its messing with your brain, cause i would not take credit for your crap, lol. 
 
You are operating under the delusion that you are very good and are making 'hits'.  you are not.  its crap. Anyone that remotely listens to rap can see your delivery is weak.  So weak.  Its really terrible dude.  You would be laughed out of any professional situation.  So you need to improve.  A lot.  You have tons of competition out there.  And they are all way better than you.  So you need to be thankful and listen to the critiques that are trying to help you improve.  You get it?  I know you don't and I just wasted my time.  So again,  I bid you adieu. 


FIRST OF ALL red neck SPAZSI DONT DO DRUGS. second of all I don't give a **** about rap competition. 3rd and last No one is better than me.... Or anyone is better than anybody. YOU JUST MAD BECAUSE A KID LIKE ME IS getting plays more than you! 
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