Hi Everybody,
This is the first track off of my fifth album "Pumpkin".  Any comments or critiques are welcome, and thanks for listening.
 
Here it is:
https://www.soundclick.com/html5/v4/player.cfm?songID=13597576
 

I felt it probably could have ended at about 3:60 or so without adding elements like key changes or alternate choruses.  Good song though.  Again, I appreciate your voice.

Great song. I think it needs more of a distinct chorus section though. There's too much of the same thing going on verse after verse. The vocal is excellent as well as the guitars

I like the style and production. Great vocals, it is a grand song, lots of work represented here, a very good listen!

This song sounds a bit familiar somehow but it's full of good solid work, love the lyrics and production and you've done it proud.
The vocal is the stand out for me 'cause it suits the song and it's message/story, so all bl**dy good! well done an' thanks for the share.
 

Does sound a little samey, perhaps if you did a section with breakdown and as suggested above a different chorus.

Mix wise it does not sound bad here.

Good song. I think the others are right about maybe redoing this one day with a bridge and / or an instrumental movement that takes the song somewhere else for a while. Nice recording and vocals. Maybe just a tad too compressed.
 
Bill

eph221 - Thanks for listening.  I hope the song doesn't go on too long - a lot of mine do
bjornpdx - Thanks for your comments and critiques.
RexRed - I appreciate you giving the song a listen - I'm glad you liked it.
SupaReeels Music - I'm glad you liked my vocal - thanks for listening.
Wayfarer - Thanks for your comments and critiques.

This sounds good. I like the song...the rhythm'd be a pretty nice groove to play to...it kind of feels like you can hang back and hang back and play behind the beat almost...or fashionably late but still on time. If you know what I mean. 
 
Some more oohs and aahhs would improve the song. Your vocals performance sounds in a good range for you. 
 
I totally agree with Wayfarer