Hi folks
Here's a new song about my impending move back to the UK - as you can probably tell I have mixed feelings about it.
(We did the UK to USA migration 10 years ago and it's bloody hard work) 
Anyway, nits and crits welcome.
 
https://soundcloud.com/sk.lueproductions/moving-on
 
Moving on
Written and performed by Staypress
V1
There's a day that I've been waiting for a long long time
...and when it comes along it's enough to blow my mind
I've been thinking about the things I'll miss and the things I won't
I've been thinking about the things I love and the things I don't
Prechorus
I've done this before
It feels like a chore
i'm set in my ways
Got used to my days but I'm still moving
Chorus
Moving on
V2
Packed my bags and my brain checked out a while ago
For sale sign's up and I'm not sure I want to go
Prechorus
Chorus
Middle bit
I've just got used to everyone on my street
My neighbour clears my snow
Nicer people you couldn't wish to meet
I'm really sad to go - I'm still.....
Chorus to end
 
 

That the lubbliest, jubbliest and bubbliest choon of yers yet mate.
 
Too bad about the bass, though. 

Daryl, this really is a fantastic tune and mix. The mix supports the song incredibly well. Very detailed arrangement as well, with lots of "bling" that add weight to the song. Great job on this!
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Terrific little tune there, Daryl.  It just fits the mood so, so well.  Sparkling production work as usual.

All what they said, very nice Daryl

that

happy feelings
 
mega ditto to what everyone else said.
 
Jesse Q. Screed

I reay like my voice on this huan.

bapu
That the lubbliest, jubbliest and bubbliest choon of yers yet mate.
 
Too bad about the bass, though. 

Thanks mate.
Sorry about that, I couldn't afford your fee this time.

I bet Einstein would have liked this when he left.
 
Really cool all the way through! Dan summed it up nicely.
 
I'd vote for a fade out ending.
 
 
-Tom