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Steve
Beautiful song.  You have all the elements in there to bring out the emotions.  Kind of a Bob Dylan vocal treatment which works nicely. I thought there were a couple of minor timing issues, but could just be me.
I like the dreamy style of the song.

Get some girls together and have them sing "ooohhhhhs" and "ahhhhhs" and maybe some simple call and response to your lyrics. That's what I hear anyway. Reminds me of some of Bob Dylan's recent albums. 

Channeling Van Morrison before he's even dead? Isn't that kind of like cheating death?  Actually, you should send it to him. Sounds like his kind of song.
 
The guitar solo is good but a little mellow. I would have went full Jeff Beck on it, but I'm selfish that way!

Bob Dylan ! Van Morrison ! and then Jeff Beck ? ... thing is, IF I could play like you Wayfarer I'd have a go, it would probably sound great BUT  ... I can't, so v e r y frustrating .... And how do I get it to Van Morrison's ears!?
Thanks you lot, always like the good and bad comments so I might re-do this and get someone else to play guitar  Know anyone? LOL
Steve

Nice heartfelt song, I have no suggestions as they have been given, thanks for sharing.

Thanks Wookiee
 

I'm always happy to help anyone, but you seem to be a very capable guitarist to me. What you have sounds good. I probably would have gotten silly with it. I do silly exceedingly well. 

aka the master/slave dialectic.  Hegel is always relevant. :D:D

eph221 ... Your MUCH too clever for this place .... really, (BTW I don't agree with the reduction of reality over synthetic unity ... sooner feel the wind and rain on my face and use expletives to help people understand me LOL)