Bob and David, thank you both for your time and kind words!
 
Wayfarer, thanks for replying, and I may be coming around to your way of thinking.
 
Mark, it's good to hear from you.  Yes, do check out MidiGuitar 2.  It requires no special pickup and it tracks very fast, picking up pitchbends very well.  I used it to play the synth pads, as well.

Steve, I appreciate you taking the time to listen yet again and taking the time to reply.  I'm going to try your suggestions, as others are hearing the same thing.  Stay tuned.
 
Cwestmont, thanks for your input!  As I said above, I'm going to play with this today and try all of your ideas.  This is what I've been looking for.

Lynn
The song is great, so I'm looking forward to hearing the finished artical ... no pressure LOL
 

Lynn,
 
Good song and performance.   I think your vocals could come up a bit.....otherwise pretty spot on.
 
Regards

Mark, thanks for weighing in on this.  The vocals are going to rise as soon as I can get back in the studio.

I like this, Lynn, all the mix comments have already been made.  Good to hear someone else experimenting with Midi Guitar 2 it is on my wish list, thanks for sharing.

Wookie, thanks for your kind words.  Midi Guitar 2 is a real gem and a bargain at $99.
 
 

OK, I remixed this song today following several suggestions made above.  I lowered the sax and raised the vocals, as well as placing the sax closer to the center.  I like this version, and I'm glad I listened to all of you.  It can be found in post #1 and here: https://www.soundclick.co...ngid=13697442&q=hi

Sounds pretty good here Lynn...
 
Really good song you have here. The only two things I might consider is 1) there may be too much of the sax (I kind of agree with cwestmont here), and 2) the song's rhythm is so enforced with the hi hat and piano on the beat that I thought adding something on the off-beats would make it flow just a bit better, like maybe a shaker or tambo.
 
Regards,
Dan

still a good song