Picture of Health

2018/04/02 03:47:39

montezuma

We are experiencing technical difficulties.

Here's the new version. The top 4 songs have all been remixed and sound way better I think:

https://soundcloud.com/us...8625/picture-of-health

Thanks

2018/04/06 11:32:08

montezuma

My mistake

2018/04/15 18:15:46

Wayfarer

Boy I like both the songs you have posted. I think "My Cherie" is the better of the two though. The lyrics are great. Like John Lennon before he got stupid.

2018/04/16 08:04:10

montezuma

Haha, that's an interesting observation...when did he get stupid? It can't ever have been while The Beatles were together!?

2018/04/16 15:17:00

SupaReels Music

I agree with Wayfarer ... very Lennon like, liked it a lot (love your lyrics)

2018/05/07 17:36:12

ABull

Terrific demo of your song -- the bass is bubbling and I really like the guitar work. Vocals are cool as are the lyrics. Drums could be better but hey... You know if this had a strong melodic hook built around the title, it would really hit home.
Good luck,
Allan

2018/05/08 00:31:06

Leadfoot

Cool song! Kind of reminded me of Stealers Wheel a little bit. Nice fun beat and great vocals. Mix sounded good to me!

2018/05/10 10:20:57

Wayfarer

montezuma
Haha, that's an interesting observation...when did he get stupid? It can't ever have been while The Beatles were together!?

Too much post Beatles partying with Harry Nilsson. Harry could fry anybody's brain back then.

2018/05/10 14:53:00

dougk1824

It's a cool tune - the rhythm and lead guitar sound nice to my ears. As I've mentioned before, I like your lead vocal - it has a laid back quality to it that I like. I liked that ending too - nice touch there.

2018/06/01 21:52:20

montezuma

Thanks a lot Doug I appreciate you listening and commenting

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