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  • Lilibet - a new original song (p.2)
2018/04/23 18:49:04
markno999
Nice one, and a very catchy tune.  The vocal harmonies are really a stand-out.   Mix sounds really good.  
 
I am sure you banked a few brownie points from the current MrsDaryl1968 on this one.   Wives appreciate taking time to recognize them in all they do and in putting up with us:)
 
Regards
 
 
2018/04/23 19:10:18
eph221
Cute!
2018/04/23 23:49:58
dcumpian
Nicely constructed with clever and heartfelt lyrics. I'm sure the current Mrs Daryl loves it. Nice one Daryl!
 
Dan
2018/04/24 01:14:02
chicoco11
Love it.. 
2018/04/24 15:03:08
Wayfarer
Exceptional Daryl! Really do like it. It's got a very catchy hook. And why is a key change cheesy? Because some idiot on a sitcom said so? They're as effective today as they were in '65. Great stuff Daryl.
2018/04/24 19:35:20
daryl1968
Makke
Nice Pop song with sixties vibe. Pleasant to listen to well done music.
I liked the melody and mood. Good mix and sounds.


Thank you Makke
2018/04/25 17:40:24
daryl1968
emeraldsoul
I immediately liked that intro rhythm, hooked already.
 
I like that the mix elements include something trashy in the bass, to perfectly offset the brightness of the vocals, the higher tones of the supporting organ, and the hi hats. You might put an ear on your vocals, just a couple of sibilant spots, some sss's and t's popped out.
 
Ooooh, love the chorus, the harmonies especially. And the modulation of it! And the ending! And the breakdown in the middle!
 
The chorus sticks in the ear quite pleasantly. Very well done.
 
cheers,
-Tom




Thanks a lot Tom - yes - those ssss and tttt's are pretty bad - I'll fix em soon
2018/04/25 17:57:29
Lynn
Daryl, your consistency is amazing.  You always manage to put words and music together in a bright way.  Some of us were either born too late, or born too early.
2018/04/25 19:09:13
batsbrew
nice smooth mix, and a groovy context for a song..
i dig everything about this,
except i think the toms opening the tune could come down a bit to match the intensity of the song once it gets to the first chorus
 
a niggle, for sure.....
 
2018/04/26 17:33:29
daryl1968
Mesh
Lovely song mate and I bet the Mrs. really appreciates this. Another goodun from the Staypress Factory!!


Thanks Meshlet - yes, this has bought me some brownie points for at least the next few days
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