This is a song that I originally posted about 5 years ago. I've done some tweaking to bring up the vocals a little and some other general cleanup that was suggested by some of you good people here. Please let me know what you think!

https://www.bandlab.com/l...e811-80c3-00155d60d108

Mix works here Bob.

Good song and mix.  I especially liked the panning of the 2 clean electrics, the string part from 1:00-1:20, and the stop at 4:10.  Drums were excellent as well.  Not sure there's anything I'd change...

Wookiee
Mix works here Bob.

Thank you Wookiee!

mrpippy2
Good song and mix.  I especially liked the panning of the 2 clean electrics, the string part from 1:00-1:20, and the stop at 4:10.  Drums were excellent as well.  Not sure there's anything I'd change...

I appreciate the favorable review! Glad you liked it! Thank you for listening and for posting!

cool tune!
like the heavy guitars against the clean..
 
 
during the heavy parts, seems like the kick doesn't have quite enough impact,
and the snare sticks out a bit too much for my liking.....
but the guitars and bass seem cool like they are,
dig the solo, has a nice zakk wylde vibe without the ridiculous vibrato!
 
 

I appreciate the listen bats! I'll have to revisit the bass drum on this. I purposely made the snare prominent during the heavy parts though. Personal preference I guess. :) Glad you liked the solo(I agree about zakk's vibrato)! Thanks again man!

Just bumping this once. Thanks!

Excellent guitars - not a bad tone in the bunch, clean and electric. I think compositionally this is very strong. Excellent parts in the arrangement, with some super chops, and vocal performance is quality. Very well done!
 
For me, the "telephone" eq treatment for the verses got old. I could see it maybe a little in the beginning, then cut to and stay with the vocal in full-bodied mode. Does that make sense? I hope I'm explaining my thought correctly, for it's a very good vocal performance throughout. Just wanted to hear more bottom end of the vocal spectrum.
 
I think the change-up switcheroo at the end is pretty genius.
 
cheers,
-Tom

Hey thanks Tom! I appreciate all the kind words man! You explained yourself very clearly, and I think you have a good point. I'm glad you like the little change up towards the end. I like that part too. :) Thanks for listening and for your perspective man! The feedback always helps!