Very good melodies and performances. Contrasting parts also useful

I don't listen to heavy stuff much, but this sounds good to me. Solo was very nice indeed!

kakku
Very good melodies and performances. Contrasting parts also useful

Thank you for listening and commenting, kakku!

Leadfoot,
 
Very cool song.   Love the guitars and solo.   Vocals are really good too.      I agree with Tom, for me the telephone effect gets old after a bit.  I would lean more toward a telephone effect morphing into a heavily compressed vocal (but adding some bottom end back in).   Kind of like the Chili Peppers Give It Away vocal.  Super compressed but full-bodied.
 
Anyway, really well executed in performance and mix.  
 
Regards

Man, so many cool elements on this tune.  Firstly, I like the telephone effect on the vocals in both verses, but they did seem to drag on a bit.  Totally dig that snare sound, but I agree with Bat's it comes across a little hot to me.  I absolutely love the arrangement on this.  The middle jam out section was very cool and you really nailed that guitar solo - very classy and professional.  And then there's that stop and change at 4:10, holy hell that was sweet.  I didn't expect that.  Surprises like that are great.  
 
Nice job, thanks for sharing.

Great sound, song, and production.  I agree with the above concerning the telephone effect but to me that is minor.
 
Good work and thanks for posting.
 

Wayfarer
I don't listen to heavy stuff much, but this sounds good to me. Solo was very nice indeed!

Thanks Wayfarer! I appreciate you taking the time to listen, even though it's not really your thing. Glad you liked the solo!

The fx on your lead vocal was interesting - what did you use there? Overall a cool song - very heavy.

markno999
Leadfoot,
 
Very cool song.   Love the guitars and solo.   Vocals are really good too.      I agree with Tom, for me the telephone effect gets old after a bit.  I would lean more toward a telephone effect morphing into a heavily compressed vocal (but adding some bottom end back in).   Kind of like the Chili Peppers Give It Away vocal.  Super compressed but full-bodied.
 
Anyway, really well executed in performance and mix.  
 
Regards

Hey Mark! Thanks for the positive words man! Yeah I probably should do something about those verses. I'm working on some new stuff though, so it will probably be a while. :) Thanks again for listening!

Voda La Void
Man, so many cool elements on this tune.  Firstly, I like the telephone effect on the vocals in both verses, but they did seem to drag on a bit.  Totally dig that snare sound, but I agree with Bat's it comes across a little hot to me.  I absolutely love the arrangement on this.  The middle jam out section was very cool and you really nailed that guitar solo - very classy and professional.  And then there's that stop and change at 4:10, holy hell that was sweet.  I didn't expect that.  Surprises like that are great.  
 
Nice job, thanks for sharing.

Voda, thank you man! I'm glad you liked it. I appreciate the compliments as well as the crits. One of these days I'll revisit the mix. Kinda working on new stuff right now... Thanks again for checking it out!