Here, listening on vintage Auratones and a sub driven by a Marantz 1060 - volume at about 10 or 11 o'clock ...
the snare drum is consistently too loud killing any chance of hearing the timing of most all the other instruments except for the quite often way too loud electric guitar.
Turning off the sub it turns into a snare drum and lead guitar song. The bass disappears in a lot of the parts.
Would love to hear it with a balanced well eq(d) mix.
Sorry to be ... well ... bluntly honest.
Nice tune and good idea and nice composition ...... hate the mix.