Hi guys and girls.  Am a big P5 fanboy myself and i did not give up on it  ;)
 
For this one I just finished, all tracks are done in P5 and the mixing down / mastering was in Sonar X1. 
 
 
ps. I dont not play music for living , and am not a singer.This is just a home producer/ hobby so please do not be disappointed .
 
Something different for fun ...Hope you enjoy :) thank you
 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5tigXR9aEUs
 
OrganiK DreaM

The bass could use a touch of effects and modulation throughout the track to spice it up and keep it interesting, as it sits too upfront and dry compared to the rest of the tracks, which I really like.  Some good pads and other synth parts in there, for sure.  The female vox, nice, your vox...well, we were warned, lol.

Thanks for the review Techlo . I agree about the bass.I am going to re work it a little and add in maybe some arp/ modulation and see what effects could help make it sit right. 

Do you think I should get away from my vox sample (so fine etc. ) am not a singer lol I wish I can get hold of a good vocalist to transform my idea :) I am thinking maybe I can take it all out and focus on the female vox for the track build up ! then I would need to change the song name hmm. I am currently working on a remix so am gona hold off to restructure the original . Thanks again :) 

The bass seems to drag a little - maybe a few bpm faster.  And yea, the bass is out there pretty nekid for long periods of time.  Something to keep it interesting through evolution.

As Tech sez the other sounds are nicely layered and keep things moving.  A lot of nice work there.  I'm not wild about the cher effect everywhere, but you do a better job than many I've heard.  You actually do some takes on it that are good.

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Hi, Organik! I like the mix of the various tracks you have. But the bass, despite being a great patch, is quite repetitive. Also, it sounds that for the bass you repeat first two chords, then play the third, then the fourth. The fourth chord doesn't sound very pleasant, so maybe try playing the third chord twice in a row, or try a different chord. Try to put the bass through a filter with various wet/dry combos to make it less tiring. Overall, not bad at all. Keep at it!