What if the hi hat went silent at the same points when the bass goes silent on that funky riff the bass has? An example area would be the 2:40's
Guitars are tasty and trashy at the same time. I liked the song and his vocal delivery. You might mix the vocals up a bit louder.
Does "boilin bunnies" mean anything? I'd Google search it but I'm afraid of what rabbit hole it would lead to.
:)
cool rawk!
-Tom